Fic/Art (CYOA): Journey to the Land Where Formal Etiquette is Useless (Dirk<3Jake<3Jane<3Roxy)

[fayharley]

Summary: While chasing his dog, Jake Harley finds himself tumbling into a most curious land. Adventure and romance awaits and only you, the reader, can determine the outcome!

Characters: Dirk Strider, Jake English, Jane Crocker, Roxy Lalonde
Ships: Dirk<3Jake<3Jane<3Roxy


Category One:
Tags Present: dubcon (mind control)
Tags Not Used: NSFW
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Category Two:
Tags Present: character death (comedic), character death (implied), drugs (love potion)
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Category Three (Optional):
Tags Present: alcoholism, animal imagery: sea creatures, profanity, mind control, non-sexual non-consensual acts, reality-bending, torture (implied).

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Journey to the Land Where Formal Etiquette is Useless:
A Choose Your Own Adventure Novel

Comments

[shinigamishi]

Ooh. This was great! I loved the different branches. I hope I managed to get all the different endings.

[watchfob]

First impressions: I really. Really like the formatting. It's so nice and clean and professional. "This looks legit," my mind said.

Upon reading the first sentence: "This is going to be good. This is going to be really good." This reads like a children's novel, the kind that you always remember because you loved them growing up, and still find enjoyment in them in later years. Which, I suppose, was the point, so good job on that.

The quotes are perf oh my god THESE QUOTES ARE PERFECT OH MY GOD

This is great. Really, great. Everyone plays off each other really well and it's delightfully trippy. As a Wonderland story ought to be. And the illustrations are great, too.

My first impressions weren't wrong.

Awesome.

[ex_lionpyh573]

AUGH THIS IS THE BEST. The quotes are acutely perfect (Nicki Minaj, h e l p). That White Rabbit. The look on that little lizard's face! Phineas Gage! THIS IS NOT HOW WHALES WORK. No/Hell no. Little Jane with her trusting hand. Oh fucktits. I'm glad the bird is fine. (I'm enjoying imagining how this comment looks to someone who hasn't read it yet! It is both an almost verbatim printout of my thoughts and calculatedly spoiler-free.) Sea + Sea is my favorite ending, but I like all of them, even the untimely sad ones. GO TEAM, this is such a good entry.

[magnificentbastards]

Oh gosh this is completely perfect and really, really fun. WELL DONE, EVERYONE.